The first sentence looks awesome! But I saw it in class and I bet it looks good. You might want to repost it so people can catch those small things that you might have to fix.
Good start, you might add something to the beginning like the title of the speech and the speaker because there is sort of a long pause before it starts. Keep working!
keep working...
ReplyDeleteI can't seem to see anything after "an hour of my time" it just freezes. Can you do another render and post it?
ReplyDeleteit froze but I really like the change of the "i" at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteI also cannot see anything after "should devote an hou..." But I think you did good. I'm looking for watching your finished work.
ReplyDeleteit stopped for me too. it's a good start
ReplyDeletesame.. it got stuck.
ReplyDeletei'm sure it looks juust amazing though!
same here. Sounds really good though.
ReplyDeleteI find the first (only?) transition really awesome. There is just something about how you timed the music, speech, and type that is pretty great.
ReplyDeleteThe first sentence looks awesome! But I saw it in class and I bet it looks good. You might want to repost it so people can catch those small things that you might have to fix.
ReplyDeletesame thing happened to me as well. I think its a good start, and the timing is right on track.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you are using the spacing and size to create empahasis.
ReplyDeleteGood start, you might add something to the beginning like the title of the speech and the speaker because there is sort of a long pause before it starts. Keep working!
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